wc-deer:

Okay, New Prophecy could have been so interesting if the perspective was split between the journeying cats. Give us more insight into each of them!! Make them interact with each other more!!

It would have hit even harder if they were gathered at night, telling each other about their Clans and their Clanmates. Give us a sense that we know these characters, we don’t have to like them but we just need to understand them at times.

Feathertail’s death would have hit even harder than it did, it could have made even me sympathetic to Crowpaw if they had some more development from their perspective.

AND THEN IMAGINE WHEN THEY GOT BACK TO THE CLANS!! They have to split up and we’re forced out of this happy aura to a sad reminder of why they really left.

so much potentiallll ughhh